I'm Aidan Keogh, a student at College of Marin, and this blog is a place where I can put up my writing. Most of my posts are going to have a focus around technology, because It's something that interests me enough to write about, but If there are any other topics I feel that I need to say something about I'll probably stick that here as well. The main purpose here is to get better as a writer, so feel free to comment on any of my posts with any critique or advice. My writing portfolio page is going to have a few samples of my more academic work, so if you're interested you can post there as well.
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ReplyDeleteYour introduction is very clear and straight to the point, it is mainly directed towards people who is into technology and your sentences flow.
ReplyDeleteYour intro is very straight forward, which I liked. You let people know what you are going to be posting about, and you offered the reader to comment on your writing. Good intro!
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